Blue Rage

For those who want to read my poem dark? Offensive to religious people?

Echoes of Eternity silence stop the fury of chaos. Rotting souls stir in the dead air. hatred has become God. The pain becomes eternity. Black clouds angry people, that their world becomes. spirits swim in translucent the black void. Life became death. Death becomes hi. Symphony Orchestra to seduce the children of the devil. Teasing, jokes, demons through generous hell. The children were silent cries. Silence becomes your reward. Time is engulfed by flames endless blue. The only joy, memories of times past. Hopes and dreams have become obsolete. despair becomes your reality. Pale sickly how it appears in the flames. sharp knife that little teeth nibbling little despair became unhappy eternity. eternity is a genocide. I was angry at work and writing is soothing to the stress for me. I wrote more than 10 years on the job.

I liked your poem and I think I should put the poem on poetry.com because I think it's very good, in fact it took me a month to write a good poem and then I really have published in my school in our new book of poetry, ink, and do not think it was a poem that is offensive to Christians who recently wrote a feeling and that is what good poets. good luck
Miss Congeniality